Changed it, with some help. Still not perfect, but I do not aspire Tolkien Levels.
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Partha, Chapter Four
By Kevin fromHey all,
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Silent Heartbeat
By Artimaeus fromThis is a fairly long story, about 6200 words. It’s already been proofread for most grammar/spelling mistakes, (but if you see any, please point them out!). I’m concerned mostly with the last scene, w…
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Partha, Chapter Four
By Kevin fromHey all,
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A Good and Happy Child, by Justin Evans
By Ophelia fromA Good and Happy Child is Evans’ first novel. I myself do not have, perhaps, the perception to say whether or not this shows; suffice it to say that, while it is entertaining, this book definitely has…
All Men Should Strive To Be More Like Edward
By Kitty fromYeah.
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21 Things I Want in a Story
By Rand fromThese are 21 things I look for in stories. Not really needs, more qualities I prefer. Since I’m the reader, I figure I have a say in the matter.
If you are currently writing a story, reading a story,…
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Very Foreign Country (Day 21)
By Carcinos from“Wow, that’s kind of a big dr-” Ryan’s comment was truncated by Thae giving him a sharp shove between the shoulder blades, sending him dropping into the room below. “OOF!”
Very Foreign Country (Day 20)
By Carcinos fromA/N: Well, the last leg. On with the show.
Allegiance (25k)
By Snow White Queen fromYes, I have only now reached 25k. And I think my writing has been suffering lately. A lot of random things have been popping in, and I’m rather unsure about how I feel about all these new additions. L…
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Very Foreign Country (Day 22, and the Last)
By Carcinos fromA/N: Well, here we are- the very last installment. It’s quite abrupt, I realize, and quite hurried at the end, but I was already over word count and was trying to find a stopping point. Also, this isn…
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Semaphore Magazine
By SlyShy fromHey everyone,
The Semaphore Webzine run by my friend recently launched its new site, so I thought I’d take this opportunity to let you know about it. It’s a great place to get some work published, in case you are interested. It also pays, although I’m not exactly sure how much, because it’s listed in NZ dollars. I’ve really enjoyed reading their past publications, and I hope you enjoy them too.
Recent Discussion
- SlyShy Dec 2, 01:13 AM (Silent Heartbeat)
Hey, This was an engaging story, but there are some points to work on. The main thing was the somewhat repetitive imagery. Stiff and cold, …
- Kevin Dec 1, 11:31 PM (Epic)
As for myself, I’m going to continue evaluating the writing on II alone on the writing’s merits, consciously disregarding any assumptions I might have about …
- Kevin Dec 1, 11:22 PM (Partha, Chapter Four)
Thanks, Virgil. Much appreciated. I’d assumed I needed an html style tag to break up the paragraphs; had I known it was as simple as …
- Snow White Queen Dec 1, 11:15 PM (Allegiance (25k))
Thanks. I’ll definitely do some of the things you mentioned. With November safely behind me, I think I’m going to take a more mellow, well-planned approach …
- Virgil Dec 1, 11:07 PM (Partha, Chapter Four)
Remember to have a full empty line in between your paragraph, or it all melds into one. I made the breaks myself, so be sure …
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