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Ok, as we all know, by far the best way to improve twilight is:
We also have posted the standard +Batman and +Ninjas. What other ways would you improve twilight? (both serious and fun, try not to repeat)
Me? Actually keep it as is. Edward’s fascinated with Bella because she’s the first woman he won’t get bored with after 5 minutes (because he can read their minds, get out of the gutter you). Only this time, Bella is – you know – interesting. (examples: A witch, a musical artist, famous actress and they have to deal with their relationship getting out in the tabloids, a raptor)
Jacob should have never imprinted. Then he could stick around for the next several hundred years and ruin Bella’s love life forever.
(I’m going to hate myself for saying this…)
I found it a little funny that a mormon book didn’t propose that Bella marry both guys.
Oh, jeez. I wonder how much more/less popular her books would be if she’d actually done that.
On the subject of Edward and Jacob sharing Bella, there’s an actual quote from Breaking Dawn…
“I don’t care about anything but keeping her alive. If it’s a child she wants, she can have it. She can have half a dozen babies. Anything she wants. She can have puppies, if that’s what it takes.”
...BAHAHAHA
Anyway. About a million more similar gems can be found here
On a more serious note, fleshing out the secondary characters, particularly the humans, as people, rather than stereotypes and cardboard cut-outs. I can’t really comment on the book, but the film’s characters seemed a bit flat.
Jet on agony booth said
Bella’s Friends (Anna Kendrick, Michael Welch, Christian Serratos, Justin Chon). I would dearly like to shake Ms. Hardwicke’s hand for the way she handled these guys. Personalities! Senses of humour! Character development! Believeability! Of all the characters in the Twilight universe, they’re the ones who got the most obvious overhaul, and it’s all for the good. I want these guys as my friends.
So now imagine how much less there was in the source or something. (is it possible to have negative amount of character?)
Another excellent point LucyWB. Imagine if the vampires were even more unique. Instead of having just speshul powers, one has speed, another has strength, but also weaknesses. Edward sparkles in the sunlight but another Cullen bursts into flames. One is allergic to garlic, another can be staked, etc.
The only thing Meyerpires have in common with vampires proper is drinking blood, so let’s go whole hog and say that’s the only thing they have in common with each other.
Edward: Bella, you must keep mirrors away, they are my weakness.
Bella: How?
Edward: I stare at myself in them. The last time it happened I spent thirteen years frozen before Carlise broke it.
Bella: So… just mirrors then?
Edward: Well I’m allergic to shellfish too.
Rape.
C’thultu dance numbers. Every 12 min. On the dot.
“Ph’nglui mglw’nafh Cthulhu R’lyeh wgah’nagl fhtagn.“
And an explosion in every living room! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!
:D
Ladies, Gentlemen; We have ourselves a movie.
:D
I think Renesmee should be born as a complete monster at first.
Bella: Noooo! Not the narration!
SMeyer: Sorry, bub.
Bella#1: His hair was a gorgeous shimmering bronze. Just the sight of it made me melt.
Bella#2: Dig the hair, ladies! Fo shizzle that guy makes me jizz!
Bella#3: I snuck around the edge of the cafeteria wall. I had to peer at his hair; it was making me crazy. I hoped he didn’t see me…
Bella#4: His hair was, like the rest of him, handsome. I suppose, if I was being honest, the way he looked was a large chunk of my attraction to him, but there was also something else about him that made me want to know him better…
Gee. Put in Bella#4, and you’d have a completely unrecognisable story!
I like #2 better. >>
Make Bella black.
Make Carlisle a necromancer and Edward a reanimated corpse.
Make Bella a hemophiliac. Blood = death.
@Puppet – all of its fans would disappear because the main male lead would be ugly and clumsy and boring and all those other degrading adjectives Bella- excuse me, Bello in the new version- uses about her himself
Jet’s idea of having good vampires like the Cullens hunt down bad vampires in order to protect the humans. And they’d have different strengths and weaknesses.
I take no credit for this idea; I have merely brought it to you from the Agony Booth.
I’m still going with Bella as a hemophiliac. That would be a twist.
Lol, I’d love to see that.
This came to me from the movie.
The biggest enemy of science is death. Why? Because scientists die which mean new scientists have to spend time and effort learning what came before in order to proceed forward.
Example:
Allen makes a discovery. Allen dies.
Bob comes along, studies Allen’s work and adds to it. Bob dies.
Carl comes along, he studies Allen’s and Bob’s work before adding to them. Carl then dies.
(etc etc)
Enter: Meyerpires.
They only have to learn the basics once and then can continue to make new discoveries indefinitely. Just imagine the Cullens’ home with this in mind. A chalkboard where the latest digit of Pi is listed. A room dedicated to prime numbers. As well as humorous scenes (Edward’s in algebra 101, working on string theory equations while the teacher talks). And, again, how that would impact a society. (would they ever need to hunt again? or would humans bring the “living libraries” food every day?)
Seriously, did the books ever explain why Meyerpires live in hiding?
Crap, that’s a really cool idea….shakes head Meyer disappoints me even more.
I live and breath math and I don’t memorize the square root of pi. The reason being that’s one of the singularly most useless things to know, ever. That expression never comes up in real math problems. Oh well, Smeyer.
I know most of the square roots from 1 to 10, because those do come up.
Why she jumps off cliffs in order to hear her freaky stalker scolding her…
But the rest of the movie doesn’t really try to establish her as smart, other than the glance-analysis in the Biology class, which apparently isn’t noteworthy, so the Pi Incident seems a little out of place.
Her intelligence is extremely poorly characterized. None of the things she does make rational sense. Which isn’t to say that characters should only act rationally—indeed well written characters do act irrationally, just as humans do. But from someone as “intelligent” I would expect more analysis of a situation before doing the irrational thing.
Even if it was just
Her thoughts screamed at her as she rode. What are you doing? There are better ways! What if.. She brushed them aside. This was the only way.
Or something better written than what I can scratch out :D
I just want to see some doubt with her, even if its only temporary.
Bella has already done all the labs…
The first time I misread that as “done all the lads”
Which means by accident, RVL has also given a suggestion on how to improve the book.
Then you have to wonder, would her blood still smell so good to Edward if she gets all those diseases flowing through it?
Oh, Bella’s high school guy friends are hardly the type to have STDs. Eric’s pretty much set on being a career virgin.
I also read it just like that, and again when I reread it.
Edward should be immune to all diseases, because he’s dead. And a Meyerpire, so he probably cures STDs as well.
Maybe Twilight would just be better as a classic Noir film. Actually, vampires in detective noir seems like an excellent idea. Hold on a moment while I write this down.
Twilight as a children’s moral story book series. You know the sort:
Edward and the Window: a story about respecting others’ privacy
Bella and the Spring Dance: a story about lying
Alice and the Vision: a story about meddling in other people’s affairs
Aro and Alice: a story about covetuousness
Rosalie and the New Family Member: a story about envy
etc etc.
Edward and the Window: a story about respecting others’ privacy
Bella and the Spring Dance: a story about lying
Alice and the Vision: a story about meddling in other people’s affairs
Aro and Alice: a story about covetuousness
Rosalie and the New Family Member: a story about envy
Yes. This is so getting written.
Despite never having talked to her in my life, I need Kitty to do the illustrations. We so should!
I’ll speak to my medium who will in turn contact the spirit of Kitty. It’s a complicated process, you see.
Um. I don’t like dealing with the underworld very much. Last time I ended up locked out of my house covered in paint with my underwear on my head.
If he had any guts he would hijack it back.
Wow, Nate’s gonna come back and realise we’ve totally hijacked his thread.
As if I care. It’s not like I have any spare nukes for you anyway.
...
Oh here’s one!
Maybe Twilight would just be better as a classic Noir film. Actually, vampires in detective noir seems like an excellent idea. Hold on a moment while I write this down.
I think they had that a series Sly. It was done by Joss Whedon. Started with an A. Ended with “ngel”.
I think they had that a series Sly. It was done by Joss Whedon. Started with an A. Ended with “ngel”.
I’ve watched it. That’s not quite what I’m getting at, though.
I figured Sly, what is funny is that’s how behind the scenes is described. Angel was supposed to be very Noir with, of course, a vampire.
Well, at least it would solve the problem of Kristen Stewart having no expression on her face…
True, very true…
awesome ftw
A friend of mine sent me Twilight- the really real version.
It all makes sense now! I know why Edward can’t read Bella’s mind!
EDIT: Fixed! Special thanks to Nate, for being super awesome. :D
Teh link iz borked. You put an extra “http” in there.
Dan that would also explain a lot about Bella’s only 2 expressions.
Now I so want to write a story about cyborg vampires fighting ninja werewolves.
Did I mention that I love you? This is AWESOME!
It is AWESOME indeed.
Hm. If they mixed Twilight and Terminator that would indeed be better. Of course they should also replace Kristin Stewart with Summer Glau.
Summer Glau? But she’s weird.
Even weird is better than Kristen Stewart…
Actually, all I know about Summar Glau is from xkcd.
I must create more Firefly and Serenity fans so people understand. :/
I’ll understand as I can convince my favourite Physics teacher to lend me her DVDs.
Better yet- Jacon summons Bigger Fish. Everyone dies.
I must create more Firefly and Serenity fans so people understand. :/
I’m a fan Sly. It’s ok.
Summer Glau! <3
And she is so sweet at cons. ^^
Have you met her?
Yup. :3 She’s so tiny!
Going off to meet Nathan Fillion and Ben Browder tomorrow. <3
I am no so very jealous of Jeni that I cannot speak to her.
Jeni goes to a huge number of conventions. /jealous