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    Anthorn is a Guardian forced to babysit Nikita.

    As punishment for disobeying orders Anthorn is sent to Imara to babysit a wealthy merchants daughter as she visits Caraksand and Mana City. he finds the duty both dull and insuslting. He is alarmed among other things to learn that Nikita is part of a resistance group that is plotting against the Guardians and the Council of Alexiamdra. Alarming still is the growing attraction he has for her.

    The orders he disobeyed were tge execution of women and children.
    Sent to Imara he is to be bodyGuard to Nikita Sarakus.
    Anthorn dislikes her at first finding her posh and stuck up.
    Nikita doesn't like him because he's a Guardian.
    They travel by horse and carrage, spend alot of time together. Anthorn opens up to her and she opens up to him as well.
    Anthorn becomes suspicious of the people she meets.
    He is stunned to eventually learn that Nikita is part of a resistance group plotting against the Guardians and the Council. He is then implicated in the plot and they're both thrown into prison to be executed.
    Escaping he has no choice but to join the resistance too.

    Anthorn is a conman/thief. Nikita is an opera singer.

    Anthorn after being discovered by a target is attacked and wounded. Taking shelter in a building he meets Nikita an Opera singer who takes him in and nurses him back to health. Nikita is intrigued by this man as she lived a once sheltered life. She wants him to find her sister who vanished over a year ago.

    Anthorn Xebiar, raised by Revera Mortainia to be a killer and a tool.
    Has a carefree swashbucking attitude.
    Had a younger sister who died from illness.
    Anthorn was conning a Governors house out of money when he is caught. Runs for life and wounded. Hides where Nikita discovers him.
    Nikita was part of the Order of the rose until it was destroyed. Rescued by Xara she was given tot he Opera house where because of her voice she became a rising star.
    Her sister Sarana wasn't so lucky and vanished.
    Life in the Opera house is safe but boring. She sees Anthorn as excitement.
    Nikita begs Anthorn to take her with him one night.
    When he doesn't she sneaks out and almost gets raped. Anthorn resolves to teach her self defense much to the annoyance to his crew.
    A friendship/romance soon begins to blossom.
    Both Anthorn and Nikita a framed for a murder and must flee the city.
    Anthorn agrees to help Nikita search for her sister.

    Anthorn is a thief. Nikita an opera singer.

    Anthorn discovers Nikita after the Order of the rose collapses.
    Takes her in. Trains her in thievery and self defense.
    Together with his crew they preform cons etc.
    Anthorn falls in love with her.
    Hearing her voice he orginises a heist, targeting the opera house he plans to get her inside.
    Once inside, he abandons Nikita inside the opera house, giving her a new life.
    Years pass he becomes more jaded and a killer.
    Nikita has become a succesful singer and is engaged to be married.
    Has guilt over her sisters disappearence.
    Decides to contact Anthorn hoping he might find her.
    Anthorn meets Nikita at a Masque ball.
    They're attacked by shadowmen.
    They escape but are attacked again.
    Rescued by Rosina and Alwyn.
    They head to Winterfell but dont find Sarana.
    Rosina tells them the only way to escape the Shadowmen is to head to the Abandoned Isle.
    They start the long journey only to be caught up with the Dumas Erandi, a resistance group.
    Rosina has lied about the reason they're being hunted.


    Too many ideas so hard to choose this is why im stuck. Opinions?
    • CommentAuthorCodeWizard
    • CommentTimeJul 12th 2009 edited
     

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    I like the first one, but you should really just go with whatever feels natural, and the story you want to tell. Or you could use a magic eight ball, that works fine too.

    • CommentAuthorCodeWizard
    • CommentTimeJul 12th 2009
     

    An eight ball would be perfect. It would save you time whenever you have issues dealing with ambiguity in your life. It will help us so we don’t have to groan when you keep posting questions that you, as author, should already know. Everyone wins.

    • CommentAuthorLccorp2
    • CommentTimeJul 12th 2009
     

    If you’re the same Anthorn from Absolute Write, I have only this to say:

    Go and write.

    There is no need to seek validation from others at every part of the process. You’re making it seem as if you’re just looking for attention.

    CB is right—these things you should already know.

    • CommentAuthorCodeWizard
    • CommentTimeJul 12th 2009
     

    Look, I remain convinced this guy is the most marvelous troll ever. Just google “anthorn and nikita”.

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    I did. Until then, I had no idea that someone could post such a limited array of topics across such a vast area of the Internet.

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      CommentAuthorMoldorm
    • CommentTimeJul 12th 2009
     

    Thre’s no way any troll can be as marvellous as Tara.

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    As in Tara Gilesbie?

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    Who else?

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    True.