Eragon & Eldest: A Star Wars Plot Recap

This should refresh you on some of the basic similarities between Star Wars and Inheritance. Coincidence? I’m not too convinced. ((Parts in double parentheses are additions by Sally.))

Eragon / Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope

Eragon1 grows up on a subsistence farm in a remote part of the world2 with his uncle. Eragon finds a mysterious object, sent by a rebel princess, and intended for someone else. The mysterious object results in the destruction of the farm and the death of Uncle Garrow3 at the hand of the Empire’s4 agents. The agents search of Eragon, but the object leads him to the town bum ((and the person for whom the mysterious object was in fact intended)), Brom5. Brom leads Eragon to safety from the Empire, shows him that he is a dragon rider6, and trains him in magic7. And he gets a special sword that only dragon riders yield (and they have special colors)8, ((which at one point is revealed to have been his father’s)). Eragon insists on rescuing the elven princess Arya9 from the Empire’s massive dungeon10. Trouble occurs when the Emperor’s right hand man, Durza11, a black magic user12, arrives on the scene. Brom sacrifices himself to fight Durza while Eragon and Arya escape. Eragon meets a handsome, morally gray, scoundrel who assists him, Murtagh13. Shortly after arriving at the rebel camp, the Empire attacks in force, but is defeated.

Eldest / Star Wars Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back

In Eldest, Eragon travels to see his new mentor, Oromis14, a powerful dragon rider whose existence was a secret. ((Eragon studies with Oromis for a while, but before his training is complete he runs away to help his friends.)) The Rebels are being chased by the Empire, and are forced to relocate in Surda15. ((Meanwhile, Eragon’s sibling’s beloved Katrina13 is captured by the Empire, and he will aid in her rescue at the beginning of the next installment.)) The Empire and the Rebels have a showdown, where it is revealed that Murtagh is Eragon’s brother, and their father was the Emperor’s old right hand man, Morzan16. ((In the process, Eragon loses his sword.))

Eragon explanations:

1 Luke Skywalker

2 Tatooine

3 Uncle Garrow

4 The Galactic Empire

5 Obi-wan Kenobi

6 Jedi Knight

7 The Force

8 Lightsaber

9 Princess Leia

10 The Death Star

11 Fake Darth Vader

12 Dark Force

13 Han Solo

Eldest explanations:

14 Yoda

15 Hoth

16 Some interesting things to consider here. Some people like to argue that this isn’t a blatant rip-off, because Leia was supposed to Luke’s sibling. But all Christopher Paolini is doing is subtracting the relationship from Arya and adding it to Murtagh. The underlying value of the equation hasn’t changed. There is also some role confusion between Morzan, who is clearly Darth Vader, and Durza who is also clearly Darth Vader. ((I would argue that Durza isn’t Vader, who does little or no direct fighting in the first movie, but rather a humanoid incarnation of the Death Star. By hitting the critical spot, Eragon/Luke is able to destroy him/it. Instead, it’s Murtagh who steps into the role of Vater for the later books.)) Paolini just took Darth Vader and split him into two personality lacking villains. As it turns out, Morzan was a member of the ancient order who went to the dark side, betrayed it, and lead it to its downfall.

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Star Wars is a classic archetypal epic journey. Examine and compare with the Harry Potter series – you’ll find many similarities as well. HP is also an epic journey.

It’s part of the form, man.

True, true, but still…if you can make such blatant comparisons like that, you know that someone has a severe lack of creativity. (and by someone you know i mean christopher paolini)

You can’t really transplant specific events from SW straight into HP like slyshy did with eragon…it’s still an epic journey, but there’s a difference between similarities between genre/type of book and just plain copying.

(well, i consider it to be a ‘legal’ form of copying. it really took soooo much creativity on cp’s part to meld star wars plot with lord of the rings culture. even my nine year old brother would have been capable- he loves both. sure, he might have replaced dragons with dinosaurs, but at least the dinosaurs would have done something important, unlike what CP did!)

Clearly, Paolini has run out of ideas. Rather- let me restate that- he never had any to start with!
His writing is well-off enough, considering he was nineteen, eighteen, perhaps, when he first started writing if overly dramatic.
His story, whoever, needs to stop ripping off from predecessors.
Star wars is still the indisputed best. V. true- Copying is the most sincere form of flattery!

I added a few extra similarities (they’re in double parentheses). Let me know if you object and I’ll remove them (or you can do it yourself, obviously).

Nope, it’s cool, and spot on.

Ha! Awesome! Now, watch “Wanted” from last summer, and do it again. God, its funny.

Honestly, just arguing that ‘Star Wars is the classic hero cycle, therefore every other series using the Heros Cycle is like it’ just does not work for me. Examine The Matrix, for example. That follows the heros cycle as well, and yet has little to no similarities to Star Wars. I’m going to link to Anti-Shur’tugal here, which has a similar article about Star Wars/Eragon which is a great read, and goes even more in depth into plot similarities than this article: http://www.anti-shurtugal.com/starwars.htm

Yeah, it gets bad when you can change the names of places and things, and the story is the same.

I was aware of the similarities between Eragon and Star Wars the moment I walked out of the theater after seeing the movie (this was before I even touched one of the bricks).

Is it even legal for CP to adopt other people’s plots like that? You would expect George Lucas to sue the hell out of him by now.

A legal battle: the one form of criticism that CP really, really can’t ignore. At least, one would hope.

This has probably been stated at some point: both stories are pretty generic, so it’s no surprise they are extremely similar. On this basis there isn’t much legal ground for a law suit, especially since Star Wars isn’t losing any money from Inheritance, and Star Wars as a brand isn’t being damaged. Still, the similarities are lame.

I think you are trying to hard to find plot similarities. when you go over the book so basically sure there are some similarities in it but some of them you have tried to seem like plot similarities but are not. Surda was always a base for the Varden just not the one they were using during the books events. If you read the 3rd book you will find it highly differs from the star wars series with multiple plot twists that are just not similiar to star wars at all. the whole lightsaber thing is just stupid. the colours is just so they match their dragons not specific and the lightsabers were completely different from conventional weapon in star wars but in eragon they are just better swords so the riders dont break them with their strength. also the “force” in starwars was limited to use by jedis but in eragon many people use it. and magic is a key feature in most fantasies star wars cannot claim the force/magic as its own. “Darth Vader”? (morzan) is revealed NOT to be eragons father and the sword is therefore not his fathers. At no-point does Vaders other child turn againt luke either. The comparison between han solo and murtagh is laughable as they have virtually no similarities with han solo being a comic releif styled character and murtagh being very dark and secretive. Also you blend multiple charcters into one starwars one. That in itself shows the weakness of your arguement having to swap people about in your points. And the DEATH STAR is being compared with a standard prison in eragon. I beleive the death star destroys planets? wheras this is shown to be a normal prison in eragon. The Death star would be urubaen the evil kings citadel if it was anything but they have had nothing to do with that yet. Whilst i admit there are some similarities EVERY book can be found to have similarities with another be they coincidental or on purpose but implying it is an entire rip off is just stupid cynical an narrow minded

It’s true that Paolini branched his series off in the second and third books, but the similarity in the first book is undeniable.

That said, even the differences you point out are superficial at best. Even on top of that, there are tons more reasons Inheritance is poorly written, that have nothing to do with the derivative plot line.

If you like, I can go into more detail and deconstruct both your arguments and your grammar.

Oooh, snap! :P

I love these articles (I look for a new one every morning to read during breakfast). Please keep churning them out!

The third footnote should be Uncle Ben, not Uncle Garrow.

Otherwise, very nice! ;)

Good catch. It all starts to blend together in my mind.

I loved this, it’s so true.

One thing bothered me however, though I might be missing the point – Brom never sacrificed himself against Durza, he sacrificed himseld against the Ra’zac. Plus, Arya wasn’t there yet.

Sorry to be a hair-splitter. :P

Absolutely love it! Thanks, SlyShy!”

Oh and, actually, the third footnote should be “Uncle Owen”. :p