Critique

The Forest
By RisenDemon from 287 days ago
Comment [11]
Constructive Sporkism: Vol. 1
By SlyShy from 373 days ago
Comment [11]

Night lay upon the shadowy forest. There was no moon, but Silverpelt shone brightly across the sky. The night air was cold and frosty with the heaviness of bareleaf.

Constructive Sporkism: Example
By SlyShy from 377 days ago
Comment [11]

Of course, this sporking comes with some bells and whistles in form of more in depth analysis (to the extent that we can provide it).

Magic for your review
By Nate Winchester from 396 days ago
Comment [11]

I’ve been working on both my writing and world building for their setting. One of the central parts of that world is obviously the magic system, so here is the “wiki” entry for it.

Come Aboard the Vagabond: Chapter 2
By Angel of Death from 400 days ago
Comment [3]
Great Black Huntress, Chapter 2
By trexmaster from 402 days ago
Comment [1]
Great Black Huntress, Chapter 1
By trexmaster from 405 days ago
Comment [7]
Come aboard the Vagabond: Chapter 1, v.2.
By Angel of Death from 408 days ago
Comment [6]
The Tree
By Rhaego from 409 days ago
Comment [9]
Dauntless
By Optimus from 409 days ago
Comment [6]

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